Sunday, January 11, 2032
Very nice start, Tim. It has me hooked.
Good start with the smell bit!
Nice product idea InSight!
I would change in one sentence…
It would be difficult to characterize the exact nature of the bouquet, since the fragrance was an unpredictable combination of materials…
->
It would be difficult to characterize the exact nature of the fragrance since it was an unpredictable combination of materials…
Otherwise off to a perfect start, Tim! Look forward to the next chapter.
I like it! Keeps those suggestions coming as the chapters tumble out.
Great first Chapter !! Your writing style is captivating. Looking forward to tomorrow's chapter.
Thanks, Ken. I appreciate that!
You have me hooked, Tim! A small correction. You need 3 pilots for long international trip in your Gulfstream, not 2. And there’s a sleeping area for a pilot in the Gulfstream 650.
I never would have known that, thank you! I'll make that tweak!
Excellent start, intriguing.
Grabs your attention! Looking forward to being a Davos insider…
I’m delighted that the first chapter has come out and I look forward to hearing your reactions.
Very nice start, Tim. It has me hooked.
Good start with the smell bit!
Nice product idea InSight!
I would change in one sentence…
It would be difficult to characterize the exact nature of the bouquet, since the fragrance was an unpredictable combination of materials…
->
It would be difficult to characterize the exact nature of the fragrance since it was an unpredictable combination of materials…
Otherwise off to a perfect start, Tim! Look forward to the next chapter.
I like it! Keeps those suggestions coming as the chapters tumble out.
Great first Chapter !! Your writing style is captivating. Looking forward to tomorrow's chapter.
Thanks, Ken. I appreciate that!
You have me hooked, Tim! A small correction. You need 3 pilots for long international trip in your Gulfstream, not 2. And there’s a sleeping area for a pilot in the Gulfstream 650.
I never would have known that, thank you! I'll make that tweak!
Excellent start, intriguing.
Grabs your attention! Looking forward to being a Davos insider…
I’m delighted that the first chapter has come out and I look forward to hearing your reactions.