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Hugh's avatar

Very nice start, Tim. It has me hooked.

Peter Tegelberg's avatar

Good start with the smell bit!

Nice product idea InSight!


I would change in one sentence…



It would be difficult to characterize the exact nature of the bouquet, since the fragrance was an unpredictable combination of materials…  

->

It would be difficult to characterize the exact nature of the fragrance since it was an unpredictable combination of materials… 



Otherwise off to a perfect start, Tim! Look forward to the next chapter.

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