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Hugh's avatar

Still hooked. Think you could do more regarding the cell phone. How did it end up on the floor? He just dropped it? I think he'd likely have tried text someone (Dylan?) as soon as he became uneasy and then Flynt would have to remove it from him forcibly.

edit: scratch the above. I see it's critical to subsequent plotline :)

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Excellent opening scenes!

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