I'm enjoying the novel so far. I like that I can read it in bite-sized chunks. There was something that seemed out of context in this chapter though - "The live video feed had all the drama of a real estate agent’s open house recording. " I would delete it. It adds nothing and it's odd, out of place.
I'm enjoying the novel so far. I like that I can read it in bite-sized chunks. There was something that seemed out of context in this chapter though - "The live video feed had all the drama of a real estate agent’s open house recording. " I would delete it. It adds nothing and it's odd, out of place.
You're probably right about that. Got it!
Really enjoying starting my day with these engaging chapters! Thank you Tim!
You are quite welcome; I'm glad you like it so far.