I'm enjoying the novel so far. I like that I can read it in bite-sized chunks. There was something that seemed out of context in this chapter though - "The live video feed had all the drama of a real estate agent’s open house recording. " I would delete it. It adds nothing and it's odd, out of place.
I'm enjoying the novel so far. I like that I can read it in bite-sized chunks. There was something that seemed out of context in this chapter though - "The live video feed had all the drama of a real estate agent’s open house recording. " I would delete it. It adds nothing and it's odd, out of place.
You're probably right about that. Got it!
You are quite welcome; I'm glad you like it so far.