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joey's avatar

I'm enjoying the novel so far. I like that I can read it in bite-sized chunks. There was something that seemed out of context in this chapter though - "The live video feed had all the drama of a real estate agent’s open house recording. " I would delete it. It adds nothing and it's odd, out of place.

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Slope of Hope's avatar

You're probably right about that. Got it!

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Amy's avatar

Really enjoying starting my day with these engaging chapters! Thank you Tim!

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Slope of Hope's avatar

You are quite welcome; I'm glad you like it so far.

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